Last week I marveled at my ability to use the word glockenspiel not once but twice in a story. “That’s a once in a life time experience” I told myself.
But I was wrong.
Last night I went to an 80s party at Neeta and Jeff’s house. Now being Americans, their 80s experience was somewhat different to mine here in Oz. Jeff looked fabulous in ripped jeans and bad hair dressed, in his words, as any bass player or drummer from pretty much any 80s rock band. Neeta had the leggings, black tutu, braces and lace gloves looking as cute as ever. Jeff played Pretty in Pink, Top Gun and Footloose on various TVs. So far, so good. However the noticeable difference was the centerpiece of this party. And here I am going to use a word I have never used before. The centerpiece of this party was an ice luge.
Ice lugeI hear you ask (after you tell me it’s two words, not one)?
An ice luge is a very large block of ice, higher at one end with two channels carved into it in a sort of reverse V. Fair maidens (in this case a pretty good imitation of Chrissie Amphlett and a famous children’s author dressed in full punk regalia) pouring a cocktail with the apt name of Kamikaze down the channels with party goers lips glued
to the channels slurping down ice cold shots. Nice concept. (And also a potent reminder of why, lush as I am, I do not drink hard liquor. I am having to drink a cold beer just to write this blog but such is my dedication to my blog audience that I shall sacrifice myself on the altar of love to get this piece out because I do have something important I want to share.)
Ice luge. I’ve gotta say , as an ice breaker (Ha! Ha!) it’s hard to go past the abilities of the ice luge to bring complete strangers together, share copious germs and then drink disinfectant in the form of pure alcohol.
So now I have added a new word to my vocabulary and one I am sure never to forget even though right now I would really like to.
But back to glockenspiel. It has had another outing. Before I went and trollied myself at an 80s party, I spent Saturday at Varuna House in the Blue Mountains edifying myself by attending Marele Day’s writing master class, From Rough Idea to Final Draft. I’ve never done a writing course before and I had a ball. Marele started by asking us write down the answer to 16 questions being the first thing that sprang into our heads. To give you a feel for this exercise, here are a few of the questions and my answers:
- The name of an object
knife
- Write a simile or metaphor
rushing like a buzzing bee
- the name of an exotic creature
ocelot
- Write a statement that you do not believe
Gaddafi should not have been killed.
- The name of an object that makes a sound
Bell
- Make the object you named in 1 make a sound
The knife sings as it slices.
- Write a statement about yourself that is not true.
I have always been attractive to short foreign men.
- Write a description about where you live.
Blue, grey and green depending on the season.
Then Marele turned around and said we had to write a non-rhyming poem using our answers and we couldn’t change a word expect to add at, or, the or and. Once we had written our poems, we went around the group and read them aloud and whilst the poems were quirky, what was really interesting was they made their own sense. It struck me that because the ideas had come from a single source there was a connectivity between each answer. Rearranging those answers into a poem did make more sense of those ideas but even apparent dissimilar concepts seemed to find their own logic. Marele’s point was that we find images and ideas without critiquing ourselves and quenching our creativity (part 1 of the exercise) and by rearranging those ideas and putting them together in certain ways made sense of them (part 2 of the exercise) Rough idea to structural edit in one exercise. Brilliant.
The point is, don’t be afraid to express yourself, and don’t criticize what comes out in the process of creating. Save the criticism for the edit.
In the interest of having a good laugh and proving to you that I have, once again, managed to seed the word glockenspiel into my story, I present to you my poem. Enjoy!
Gaddafi should not have been killed.
Knife, rushing like a buzzing bee.
Is that the hospital who rang?
Crimson velour tablecloth soft enough to rest my head on,
Blue, grey and green depending on the season.
I have always been attractive to short foreign men.
The knife sings as it slices
The glockenspiel is an instrument often used in place of the human voice.
Children are the making of their parents.
I made my daughter Vegemite soldiers.
The death of Gaddafi is a cause for much celebration around the world.
Bell.
Deep, isn’t it? I think it might be time for another Kamikaze. I wonder if the ice luge has melted yet.